Move the ask to the last line
The original buried its request in a question mid-paragraph. It becomes its own line — “worth a 15-minute call this week?” — so the reader sees the action immediately.
Cold email and sales messages
Shorter, specific, and
written by a human.
No invented mutual connection and no praise of your own company. We compress the length, surface the ask, and cut flattery you cannot support — leaving clear slots where only you can supply the personalisation.
One ideaAsk up frontNo invented ties
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We compress the length, make the ask explicit, remove filler, and mark the personalisation you need to supply.
SAMPLE OUTPUT
Here is exactly what you receive.
This is the complete output for the source text in the demo above: a clarity score, itemised reasoning, personalisation slots for you to fill, and the rewritten email. It is a demonstration, not a customer case.
SAMPLE
Rewrite result (sample)
Clarity score88/100
+50
Delete praise that cannot be supported
“Long heard of your excellent reputation” is a mass-send template. It becomes a slot for one specific fact you actually know.
Remove unverifiable self-praise
“Leading provider” and “thousands of enterprise customers” are unsupported. They are cut and replaced by a slot for a proof point you can evidence.
Rewritten email
# Rewritten **Subject**: Document search for your [TEAM SIZE] team Hi [NAME], [WHY THIS COMPANY — one specific thing you actually know, one sentence] We index documents across the collaboration tools a team already uses, so people stop digging through chat threads. [PROOF POINT you can back up]. Worth a 15-minute call this week? — [YOUR NAME] **Dropped**: the second ask about partnership terms — two asks in one email, kept the call instead.
WHAT REWRITING DOES
Not persuasion tricks. Saying it plainly.
One idea per email
Two unrelated asks leave the reader unsure what to answer. We keep the stronger one.
Ask in the first or last line
An ask buried mid-paragraph gets skipped. Pick the opening or the closing.
Cut praise you cannot support
“Your company is admired” reads as a template. Replace it with something you actually know.
WHY IT IS WORTH DOING
They decide in one scan whether to delete it.
They read two lines
The opening decides whether anything else gets read, not the paragraph you worked hardest on.
Flattery is the costliest filler
Unsupported praise exposes a mass send immediately and does more damage than stating your purpose outright.
Invented personalisation is worst
Claiming a shared connection or citing something the recipient never did burns the only chance you had.
Note: reply rates depend on list quality, timing, and the offer itself; there is no universal benchmark. This site improves clarity and credibility at the text level only — it supplies no lists, sends nothing, and promises no reply rate.
REWRITE DEMO
One email, two ways of writing it.
Before
Subject: Partnership inquiry Dear Sir or Madam, I hope this email finds you well. We have long heard of your company's excellent reputation in the industry and greatly admire what you have achieved. We are a leading provider of document search solutions. Our product is powerful and easy to use, and we have served thousands of enterprise customers. We hope to establish a partnership with your company. Would you be interested in learning more? Looking forward to your reply. Best regards.
Rewritten
# Rewritten **Subject**: Document search for your [TEAM SIZE] team Hi [NAME], [WHY THIS COMPANY — one specific thing you actually know, one sentence] We index documents across the collaboration tools a team already uses, so people stop digging through chat threads. [PROOF POINT you can back up]. Worth a 15-minute call this week? — [YOUR NAME] **Dropped**: the second ask about partnership terms — two asks in one email, kept the call instead.
Demo sample: the ask moves to the last line, unsupported praise becomes a slot for a real fact, and “leading provider” is gone. Paste your email to get your version (sign-in required; one credit per run).
WHY YOU CAN TRUST IT
We put “no invented personalisation” into our product principles.
No invented connections
Mutual contacts, chance meetings, the recipient's achievements — if the source lacks them, they become slots, never plausible details.
Self-praise is removed
“Industry leading” and “thousands of customers” are cut or flagged; you supply a claim you can substantiate.
No reply-rate promises
Replies depend on your list, timing, and offer. Any “guaranteed reply” claim is false.
Content is not stored
Submitted text is used for this single AI request and is not intentionally persisted. See the Privacy Policy.
FAQ
Ask these before you pay.
Will you invent personalisation?
No. Shared connections, company news, and chance meetings become [FILL IN] slots when the source does not contain them.
Can you guarantee replies?
No. Reply rates depend on list quality, timing, and offer. We improve clarity and credibility at the text level only.
Can you find me prospects?
No. We provide no lists, scrape no prospect data, and send nothing — those are yours to prepare.
What does one rewrite cost?
One credit per run, usually done in seconds, returning the draft, the reasoning, and slots to fill.
Do credits expire?
No. Credits never expire — whatever you do not use carries over to the next cycle instead of resetting.
Is there batch processing or an API?
Not yet. Each run processes one document and consumes one credit; there is no bulk upload or API today. Email us with your use case and we will assess it.
Is my content stored?
Not intentionally. Text is used for this single AI request only. See the Privacy Policy.
Which messages fit?
Cold emails, follow-ups, partnership requests, referral asks — any short text that has to convince a stranger within seconds.
SIMPLE PRICING
Prove the value before you upgrade.
Starter
$9/ monthFor an occasional publishing cadence, with a focused monthly credit allocation.
- 50 optimization credits per monthly renewal
- Complete GEO analysis
- Chinese and English output
- Markdown export
Pro
Recommended$29/ monthFor frequent publishers who iterate on content continuously.
- 250 optimization credits per monthly renewal
- Complete GEO analysis
- Chinese and English output
- Markdown export
Advanced
$79/ monthOur largest monthly credit allocation, for the heaviest continuous usage.
- 1,000 optimization credits per monthly renewal
- Complete GEO analysis
- Chinese and English output
- Markdown export
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